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My Heart Falls to Pieces by ~meg-i-licious:iconmeg-i-licious:





Doomed to a destiny of distrust
Forever lost in a sea of what once was
Another heart broken, like before
This time, words can mend no more,
Shallow comments, wordless tears,
Our thoughts lead to a common fear,
The truth this time cannot be denied,
This pain so overwhelming we cannot hide,
Forever has ended this sad day,
but the memories of the past are here to stay,
Never forgotten will be your love,
Like a treasured angel from above,
Feeling like I've taken a flying leap,
This hurt, a wound, running true and deep
your absence growing day by day
Every chance, I glance your way
Your pain bottled in your eyes,
I watch you look to the skies,
Deep within their green depths,
Your eyes tell a story I can't forget,
Laughter, tears, hurt, regret,
Yet no longing for the past,
No desire to reconsile what we had.
Put my head down, keep on walking,
My heart falls to pieces, for they'll be no talking
©2005-2009 ~meg-i-licious
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Submitted: June 9, 2005
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its a poem, i wrote today, so yeah. enjoy. and comment because you love me o so much
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Wow...what a beautiful piece of literature...

Truely full of emotion and touching right down do the deepest part of my heart.

Did you make the graphic to go with it? Because that is quite amazing too! It is an instant :+fav:!

I will try and make a graphic similar and notify you when it is completed!

Once again, bravo on a truely awsome piece!

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no i didnt make the graphic, i wish i had that kinda of skill.

thank you so much for your comments, they mean alot! thanks!

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Ever feel like you're living a lie?
Every day of my life...
I'm fucking speachless:jawdrop:

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I don't sue,
I break legs...
much good meaghans me like lots (dont u just love my english skills)

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lalala i cant hear you lalala :nana:
Anytime! They deserve it! ;p

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I'll check out your gallery! :gallery:

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wow. to capture that feeling in words is hard, and you've done an awesome job of it.

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asherwy

Me ama!

make no judgements where you have no compassion
amazing...seriously :XD:

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loving everyday i get to see u:date:
thank you very much

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Ever feel like you're living a lie?
Every day of my life...
thank you hun, and yes i do

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Ever feel like you're living a lie?
Every day of my life...

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